I had to add an entire new section to account for a plot bomb I’d placed and forgot to detonate. Otherwise, mostly continuity glitches and the usual minor stuff. That’s done, and now only a few more chapters to go in the revision. I was afraid the end Chapter would need a complete rewrite, but after a quick review I think I did a better job than I’d realized.

Anyway, progress. In case anyone’s curious, that’s a portrait of Dessera. She’s important.