Power’s Shadow – Chapter 1, pt. 2

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Chapter 1 – Continued

“You should have run, you know,” Marta said.

Sela nodded glumly. “Father always said that, if there was a bone for common sense, I was born without it. To which I always replied something to the effect that the nut never falls far from the tree. It doesn’t seem as funny now.”

Longfeather had put Sela with Marta and the both of them against the far wall but, except to take Sela’s sword and keep the arbalest trained on them, seemed to pay them little heed. Every now and then there came a faint pecking sound as Bonetapper worked at the cords of the net, but Marta didn’t dare look and betray his progress, if any. Longfeather, if he heard, also paid it no notice. He seemed deep in thought.”If you’re wondering what to do with us,” Marta said finally. “I could offer a few suggestions. Letting us go comes to mind.”

“I’m a pirate of some reputation,” Longfeather said. “and knowing that, what would you suppose the odds are of my agreeing to any such notion?”

Marta heard the words and read his intent. Whatever his pretentions of nobility and refinement, he was a pirate, a thief and, when the occasion demanded, a murderer… Marta blinked, hearing the words echo in her mind as something important, something just beyond her reach. She ignored the feeling. There was no time. “I do know who you are,” Marta said. “and I also know that you wouldn’t be hiding alone in an abandoned watchtower snaring, of all things, gulls for food if you weren’t‑‑shall we say‑‑in straits?”

Longfeather dismissed that with a wave of one immaculately gloved hand. “A temporary setback.”

“Your patron is unhappy with you, yes?”

For a moment Marta clearly had the pirate’s full attention, then he shrugged his shoulders in a gesture of dismissal that didn’t quite come off. “Boranac of the Five Isles is known for his temper. It never lasts long.”

“No, because whatever makes him angry has a tendency to disappear. I gather you chose this way to disappear rather than his way.”

Longfeather’s pretense at calm did its own disappearing act. “The greedy sod seized my ship! He knew the last venture had been profitable.”

“You were holding out on him, weren’t you?” Sela said. Marta glared at her, but it was too late. A new notion apparently came into the pirate’s mind.

“You both know entirely too much about me. Yes….” The word came out as a hiss. “Now it makes sense,” he said. “The girl’s sword, the talking raven…oh yes, I heard him. When the snare first sprang and he was too surprised to pretend. You’re a finder witch and this charming child with the master blade is an assassin. Of course, who would suspect? Boranac sent you, didn’t he?”

“It’s my father’s sword!” Sela said hotly. “The one you didn’t manage to steal!”

“Add revenge to the mix. Oh, the tale gets better and better. Well, at least I know now what’s to be done.”

Marta sighed. “I don’t suppose it would do any good to point out that you’re full of horse apples?”

“Spare me. You think I’m not so familiar with lies that I can’t see them?”

“Too familiar, I imagine,” Marta said. “To the point you can see little else. But it won’t make any difference if Boranac finds you, will it? Let us assume what you say is true, and the Chief of the Five Isles did send us. You kill us and he’ll just send someone else. Probably several someones, who’ll find you as easily as we did.”

Longfeather glared at her. “Then you admit it.”

Single‑minded thing, aren’t you? Marta shrugged. “I merely ask you to more fully consider your situation.”

Longfeather seemed to do just that. “It is a problem,” he admitted. “but I have no alternative.”

Marta shook her head. “That’s another point on which you are mistaken. I can arrange it so that Chief Boranac never finds you.”

Longfeather smiled grimly. “I could throw myself into the ocean from this tower and arrange the same thing. Probably in a less painful manner than what you have in mind.”

“Longfeather, I swear I can keep you alive and well. Think of it–safe from the Chief of the Five Isles for as long as you‑‑or he‑‑lives.”

Longfeather pointed the arbalest at Marta’s heart. “I don’t believe you,” Longfeather said. “Unfortunately for you‑‑”

He was interrupted by a small black thundercloud of black feathers and anger. Bonetapper‑‑whom everyone but Marta had quite forgotten‑‑hurled himself out of the net as one last cord parted under his beak. He flew straight at Longfeather’s face. Startled, Longfeather threw up the arbalest and fired. Unfortunately for Bonetapper his aim was more lucky than skilled. Feathers flew, and Bonetapper bounced off the wall, rolled, and was still.

It was all the time Sela needed. She crouched, rolled, and came up with the sword Longfeather had made her drop. She nimbly dodged the now-useless arbalest that the pirate threw at her.

Marta stared at the limp raven, numb.

“‘What cannot be taken, can be given,'” she said softly, too soft for the others to hear. The Second Law of Power. There were limits on all things, and that included Marta’s power over Bonetapper. She could not have ordered him to sacrifice himself this way; that he had to do on his own. She was more than a little surprised that he had. I wonder‑‑ Marta heard the hiss of steel on leather and forced her attention back to the here and now.

Longfeather had his own sword out, a mirror copy of the one Sela held. It was clear enough from his posture and movement that he knew how to use it.

“That’s Leafcutter,” Marta said grimly. “One of the swords you stole from my father.”

“I’ll have yours as well when I’m done, but that’s just business. I’m not going to enjoy this,” Longfeather said. “Just so you understand.”

Sela looked grim. “For my part, I plan to enjoy it a great deal.”

Marta admired Sela’s courage but not her sense. Longfeather was a veteran of many such fights, with his life in the scales on each. There was no way Sela’s experience could match his.

The first moments of the duel confirmed as much. Sela was quick, and parried and moved well. Longfeather was quick too, and he was stronger. He proved it by beating past her parries on two occasions. The first time he barely missed her chest. The second tore a ragged hole in her mailshirt at the shoulder. Sela winced but did not lose either her guard or her composure, for which Marta was grateful. She needed the time Sela was providing. She also needed the application of the most recent Law of Power she had acquired. Softly, so that only she could hear, Marta spoke its name.

“The Appearance of Power, Once Accepted, Becomes Power Itself.”

The Third Law. Marta had considered collapsing the floor under Longfeather’s feet; it would be easy enough to do with an application of the First Law. But in a structure already weak from time and rot the result would be impossible to predict. She chose the Third Law instead and hoped she chose right.

“She’s better than you are, Longfeather. You’re a fool if you haven’t noticed.”

Marta worked her understanding of the law like a sculptor and Sela was the vessel. Suddenly a parry that was a shade slow seemed a shade faster. A strong beat, blade to blade, seemed even stronger. A fast lunge of Sela’s appeared, to both herself and Longfeather, to be even faster.

Longfeather pulled back a bit, frowning. Marta smiled. Her plan was working. She kept shaping, refining, adding. Nothing real, since she had nothing of substance to work with. A bit of illusion, one spoken suggestion, a furtive wave of her hand and a stronger wave of concentration, all bits of the humblest magic her mother had taught her, now put to greater service by knowledge of the Third Law.

The pirate was starting to perspire, and Sela was starting to smile again. The only thing needed right then for Longfeather to believe in Sela’s superiority was for Sela to believe it too.

“He’s good, Sela, but not as good as he thinks. It’s mostly bluff.”

“Woman, be silent!” Longfeather snarled, but he had no more breath or effort to spare on Marta.

Perfect.

Longfeather was in full retreat, his parries growing more and more desperate, his attacks half-hearted and tentative. The tip of Sela’s sword sliced the top of Longfeather’s sword hand and he dropped the blade, cursing in pain. Another moment and Sela had her point at his throat.

“Kill me if you’re going to,” he said. “But don’t gloat about it. I never did.”

Sela took a firmer grip on the hilt but Marta held up her hand. “Sela, no.”

Sela blinked. The affect of Marta’s magic was beginning to fade from her, and the anger of battle with it. Still, there was more than enough remaining. “Why not? He robbed my father, and the pain of that helped carry him to his grave. He killed Bonetapper. He was going to kill us too!”

“Which would have been a mistake on his part. Should we make one of our own? Killing him would be a waste, and the Powers hate waste.” She turned to Longfeather. “Are you willing to bargain now? Or shall I let Sela finish you?”

Longfeather eyed the sword at his throat. “I’m hardly in a position to argue.”

Marta shrugged. “Argue? No. Still, the choice is very much yours. Has to be. Otherwise any agreement we make will have no force.”

Longfeather didn’t think about it too long. “Name your terms.”

“Just these: You will serve me as I direct until either you die or the Chief of the Five Isles does…and however he dies, you must play no part in it. In return, I will keep you hidden and safe until what time as your debt is paid.”

Sela shook her head vigorously. “The bastard won’t keep his word. Don’t listen to him!”

Marta smiled again. “Sela, if you don’t trust him, trust me–he damn well will keep his word. He won’t have any choice.”

#

Marta stood by the raven’s still form while Sela gathered up the rest of Longfeather’s weapons, including her father’s other sword. She looked a little ill. “I didn’t enjoy that as much as I thought I would. I might have died…or killed. I can’t say I care for either result.”

“You may have to use that sword again, Sela. Such things happen. But if I were you I’d consider my reasons very carefully.”

She nodded. “I will.” She paused, and added. “I’m sorry about Bonetapper. He wasn’t so bad, if a little crusty.”

Marta just nodded. When she spoke, it was to the raven. “You were willing to sacrifice yourself to save us. Life for life, and that was your debt. It is paid.”

With those words the raven grew, and changed. In a moment the body of a small, wiry man lay in the raven’s place, with dark hair replacing most of the feathers. A man who was, as both Sela and Marta could plainly see, very much alive. “Not so bad, indeed,” he huffed.

Sela gasped. “He was faking!”

“Doubtless,” Marta said.

The man who had been Bonetapper rolled to a sitting position. His dark eyes were bright with exultation, even as he groaned. He pointed to a streak of red on his shoulder. “I wouldn’t call this faking. Or this…” he said, indicating an egg‑sized knot on his forehead. “It stung like hell. Still, as I recall, you seemed to imply my ‘willingness’ to sacrifice myself coin enough. You didn’t say I actually had to do it.”

Marta laughed. “True enough. My word is my word, Bonetapper. You are free.”

The man who had been Bonetapper didn’t have to be told again. He got up and hurried down the stairs as fast as he could, unused to human legs as he clearly was. He didn’t look back, or spare one more word in Marta’s direction.

Sela blinked. “That’s it, then? It’s done?”

“Why? What were you expecting?”

Sela thought about it. “Well, I don’t know, really. You and he were together for a long time, I gather. Some sort of regret, perhaps?”

“What is there to regret? His debt to me is paid and he is his own man again. I wish him joy with it, and hope he makes a better go as a human being than he managed the first time around. I have my doubts, though.”

“I suppose we’ll never know. So. Are we finished here?” Sela asked.

“Almost.” Marta put on Longfeather’s discarded gloves. They were of thin leather on the palm and fingers but the wrist and cuff were much thicker and stronger. The gloves were a bit large for Marta but they would serve.

As would Longfeather.

Marta held up one gauntlet. “Time to go.”

The goshawk that had been watching the scene from the rafters with sullen rage clumsily hopped down to land on Marta’s wrist, fighting for balance. He clearly didn’t have the full knack of perching yet. “I never agreed to this!” he wailed, which was a difficult thing for a goshawk to do.

Marta followed Sela down the stairwell, the goshawk riding precariously on her wrist. “This is exactly what you agreed to,” she said. “Think about it.”

#

They traveled for three days along the coast. Neither Sela nor Longfeather questioned Marta about this. Sela was in no particular hurry and Longfeather was still too much in a sulk to pay attention.

After nightfall on the third day Marta sat on a fallen log in a clearing some distance from their camp. She wasn’t sleepy‑‑she was expectant. She waited, but not for very long.

Bonetapper slipped out of the trees. He approached Marta hesitantly and kneeled at her feet. He looked terrible. His clothes were torn; there was a trickle of blood from his scalp and the bandage on his should was showing signs of red as well.

“Hide me,” he said.

Marta glared at him. “What happened?”

Bonetapper shrugged. “A man has to earn his way.”

“And I suppose the folk you ‘earned’ your way from will be along soon?” For answer, somewhere to the west came the baying of hounds. Marta shook her head in disgust. “You know what you’re asking, don’t you?”

“Better than anyone,” he said, his frustration more than a little evident. “Still, I’ve decided there are worse things than being a raven. It’s not fair, though.”

Marta raised an eyebrow. “Oh? How so?”

“You helped that brat of a girl, and she wasn’t made a raven, or a hawk, or horse, or whatever you need to serve you best.”

“That’s because she never asked anything of me. You did. Or have you changed your mind?”

Bonetapper shuddered slightly. “No.”

“‘As you were your own, now you are mine. As I will you, so shall you be.’” Marta repeated the ancient ritual of debt and bonding. It was a different sort of magic than that of the Laws, but even the Laws were not the sum total of everything. That might have been a Law itself, so far as Marta knew. Perhaps one day she would find out.

In a moment all was done. Bonetapper flew off to join the once and future pirate on top of the cart. Marta rose, yawned, and stretched. Best to wake Sela in case there was trouble from Bonetapper’s pursuers, but that was just a precaution. Marta wasn’t really worried. Or, for that matter, surprised. But the expectation she had felt for the last three days was gone.

Was this all I was waiting for?

Marta felt no other hints on the wind, no sense of the direction she should take now. She was disappointed but not, she reminded herself, as much as Bonetapper must be.

“Poor raven,” she said aloud, “it’s much simpler to change your appearance than what you are‑‑”

Marta stopped, suddenly short of breath. She felt dizzy, and fevered, but she wasn’t ill. It was the same recognition she had felt before, sudden as a blow and much more powerful. The same thing, though fainter, when she’d met Sela, and again with Longfeather, though she’d foolishly ignored the feeling. Marta was not yet certain what it meant, but she knew it had to do with appearances. Sela’s armor and pretended fierceness, Longfeather’s refined pose… Marta turned the words around, felt them with her mind, listened to them carefully, saw and heard the way they wanted to fit together. She was close, so very close…

“‘Changing Appearance Does Not Mean Changing Nature.’ The Fourth Law of Power.”

So simple.

Or rather, deceptively simple. As the Laws usually were. Like a stone that only showed a few inches above the dirt but kept the rest of itself hidden deep in the ground. The Law had implications, and new abilities that contemplation of its truth would eventually reveal to her. There would be time for study and testing later. For now, it was enough that the Law was hers.

Back at the camp there arose a clatter of avian squawks and screams, with Sela’s angry warnings blending in. Marta sighed. Longfeather was just enough a real goshawk and Bonetapper a real raven for trouble, and if murder wasn’t in Sela’s nature that might yet be overlooked in Longfeather’s case. Still, Marta thought it might be the right sort of trouble.

After all, if she could keep those three from killing each other, by comparison finding the Fifth Law should be a stroll on the beach.

 

((End Chapter 1 – To be Continued))

(c) 2014 Richard Parks

Power’s Shadow – Chapter 1, pt 1

Powers-Shadow-Rough-2As promised, today I start the serialization of Power’s Shadow. The cover on the left is a mockup, and will likely change. This first section will be a little longer than normal, due to the fact that the natural break point fell where it did. If you haven’t read Black Kath’s Daughter then some of this might be hard to follow. The premise is that Marta is a follower of the Arrow Path, which is both a method of attaining magical power and a debt bond between the witch and a Power called “Amaet.”  As for Amaet’s nature, I fall back yet again on Black Kath’s Tally Book: “The difference between a Power and a god is mostly procedural. You worship a god. With a Power, you negotiate.”

 

Chapter 1-1

 

“The problem with The Arrow Path or any route to power is that it tends to attract two sorts of people– those who seek power for its own sake and those who seek it as a means to an end. You’d be hard pressed to choose which of the two is capable of the greater evil.”

— Black Kath’s Tally Book

 

“Girl, am I to understand that you are threatening me?”

Marta eyed her would‑be robber with mixed curiosity and amusement, but the raven on her shoulder was just amused. Its croak sounded very much like a chuckle.

The girl in question stepped away from the scraggly bramble bush she’d been hiding behind and took a firmer grip on her sword. She wasn’t that much younger than Marta, though her bedraggled condition and the obvious fear in her eyes made her look like an armored waif. Her hair was deep black to Marta’s red gold, and worn in a long braid down her back so it wouldn’t catch on her mailshirt.

The girl waved her sword in menace, or something like it. “I told you to step down!”

 

Marta sighed. “Oh, very well. I could use a stretch.” Marta slid from her seat and stood beside her red and blue cart in the grassy clearing. The mare took the opportunity to munch some of that grass while Marta looked the girl slowly up and down, taking in her dirty, pinched face, her patched clothes, or what showed of them. Marta’s eyes lingered for a moment over the mailshirt well-fitted to the girl’s slim frame, and again on the gleaming sword. “I gather this is your debut as a…well, what shall I call you? A highwaygirl?”

Whatever reaction the girl had expected, Marta clearly wasn’t giving it to her. “I’m not to be trifled with! Do you know what blade this is?”

Marta shrugged. “Since you asked‑‑the style is shortscythe, favored for fighting on foot rather than mounted. It’s clearly Master Solthyr’s work and to my knowledge he only made seven finished blades of that type. Three are believed to be in the King’s Armory at Lyrksa. One was given as a gift to the king of Borasur-Morushe. Two were stolen from Master Solthyr himself by the pirate Longfeather last year. It’s said that Longfeather gave one to his patron, the Chief of the Five Isles, and kept the other himself. Let’s see…that only leaves Shave the Cat unaccounted for. Would this be it?”

The girl just stared at her. “Who are you?”

Marta smiled. “My name is Marta, Black Kath’s Daughter. Shall we get on with this? I have business to take care of, and it won’t wait forever.”

“Business, she calls it,” said the raven. He sounded casual enough, but he had also quietly removed himself to a safer perch on the top of Marta’s brightly painted cart. Marta, for her part, could not bring herself to be so concerned. Despite the girl’s rough appearance and obvious desperation, Marta just could not see harm in her.

She wants to be fierce, but I don’t think it’s in her nature

Marta hesitated then. She had felt a sudden rush of…recognition. That was the only word that fit, which was strange since Marta had no idea what she was recognizing, but it was the same sort of feeling she had whenever she touched upon one of the Laws of Power, and especially one that she did not already possess. It was there, within her reach, and perhaps somehow connected to this strange girl. Marta knew that, though try as she might, she could not quite grasp it. She took a little of her annoyance out on the raven.

“Do be quiet, Bonetapper. Next she’ll be asking me to explain you and, frankly, I’d rather not. Now then, what is it you want, girl?”

“Y-your gold.”

“So I assumed. You can’t have it,” Marta said. “Was there anything else?”

There wasn’t, because the girl gave up. She put Shave the Cat back in its sheath and sat down on the grass. Marta thought she was going to cry, but she didn’t. She seemed too angry for that.

“But I don’t want to die,” she wailed. “Damn all, it’s not fair.”

Marta put her hands on her hips. “By the Seven, girl, who asked you to die?”

“What choice do I have?” the girl asked, all misery. “I can’t sell my father’s sword; it’s all I have left of him. I won’t beg, obviously I can’t steal, and the only work I’ve been offered is in a brothel. Maybe that’s better than starving to death, but by the time I knew for sure it’d be too late.”

Marta nodded. “Your name is Sela, isn’t it?”

For a moment the girl seemed to forget her anger and frustration to stare, wide-eyed, at Marta. “Is there anything you don’t know?”

“Many things, including what’s to be done with you. Let’s think about that later, shall we? Bonetapper and I will camp for the night and have a bite of supper first. Would you care to join us?”

The food at Marta’s campfire was simple but abundant. Sela tucked in to the barley soup, hard bread, and cheese, and didn’t emerge for some time. Her hunger dulled enough, apparently, to give curiosity a chance again. “How did you know my name?”

“No mystery there. If you had Shave the Cat from your father, then your father was Master Solthyr. That makes you Sela, for there was no other child.”

“You knew my father?”

“Somewhat,” Marta said, since it was her nature to tell the truth, unless of course there was a good reason not to. “For a person who never actually met him, that is. Most adepts become aware of each other, in time. I made it my business to know a bit about your father and you, only because it’s to a witch’s advantage to understand who else is working change in the world.”

Sela frowned. “My father was a swordsmith, not a magician.”

Marta laughed. “When mastery reaches a certain level, there’s very little difference.”

“If you’re Arrow Path then you’re a witch,” Sela asked. “Could I have possibly chosen a worse person for my first mark? But at least that explains the talking raven.” She glanced at Bonetapper, happily pecking at a soup bone on a nearby rock. There was no fear or accusation in Sela’s tone, just more curiosity. “So. What would you have done, if I hadn’t changed my mind this afternoon?”

“That depends. Are you any good with that?” Marta nodded toward the sword.

“A bit,” Sela said. “The king’s own weaponmaster trained me, as a favor to my father. He said it would help keep the local swains at bay. Father was too busy to do it himself.”

“Well‑trained, then. I probably would have had to kill you,” Marta said frankly. Noting the look on Sela’s face, she smiled again. “Take that as a compliment, for what it’s worth.”

“I-I’ll try to remember it so.”

“Also for what it’s worth, I’m sorry about your father, but did he make no provision for you at all? Had he no property?”

Sela shook her head. “Almost nothing. Father was a master, true enough, but not very practical. He was paid well but he spent most of it importing different types of steel, or precious metals and stones for finishing. And he was always testing, experimenting with exotic fluids for quenching, Tobek firecoke… It all cost a great deal.”

“Improving his art,” Marta said.

Sela looked grim. “That may be, but when he died both his art and his worth to the king went to the grave with him.”

“Small wonder. A king’s gratitude is the dearest coin he possesses, and the wise one spends it no more than he must.”

Marta considered. She had sensed a Law, and something about Sela’s presence had triggered that feeling. The girl would be trouble, clearly, but what sort? There was good trouble and bad trouble. One was absolutely necessary for her quest; it stirred the cauldron of possibilities. The other was just plain difficulty of the quite ordinary sort, and best avoided.

There was only one way to find out, unfortunately. “Sela, I suggest a temporary alliance. With me. At least until you get a better grip on your future.”

“I think I would be foolish to refuse. But why would you be so kind?” Sela asked.

“Kindness,” said Bonetapper, glancing up from his soup bone. “What a notion.”

Marta smiled a rueful smile. “I’m afraid Bonetapper speaks the truth there. I’m on a dangerous path, and that extends to anyone with me. You may not think I’ve done you a favor before long.”

“Father spoke of the Arrow Path sometimes. You’re seeking the Seven Laws of Power, and power is always dangerous. That still doesn’t explain why you would want to help me.”

“I’m afraid it does. Once the quest for the Laws of Power has begun, it can neither be put aside nor abandoned. Seek and you will find them. Hide from them and they will find you, and that’s most dangerous of all. So, once someone takes the Arrow path, by definition there are no random encounters. I felt the presence of a Law of Power almost from the moment I met you.”

“But I don’t know any of the Laws,” Sela said.

“That doesn’t matter. You may be the key to my understanding of a new Law, so it’s to my advantage to help you. See how simple it is?”

Bonetapper finished eyeing the one last scrap of meat on his soup bone and decided it wasn’t worth the trouble. He rejoined the conversation. “You call that simple? I call it horrible.”

Marta nodded. “That, too.”

#

As always along the Arrow Path, Marta had no destination in mind. Instead she had a goal, and the direction she chose to reach it was based on instinct and little else. After two days’ travel from the time of Sela’s arrival they were very close to the Southern Sea. There was more than a hint of salt on the wind. Sela spotted the tower first, but before she could say anything Marta was already reining in the mare. “Is that a watchtower of some kind?” she asked.

Sela nodded. “There are others like it all along the coast, but the Sea Kings haven’t raided since my grandfather’s time, and the Lord of the Five Isles is well-bribed not to do so now. Some of the more remote outposts have fallen into disuse, I suspect.”

“I’d say we have the proof of that right here,” replied Marta.

The tower was on a narrow spit of land and solidly built of fitted stone but had not been maintained, by the look of it, for some time. Vines grew from base to crenelations, some of which had fallen to half-bury themselves in the rocky ground or roll off into the churning sea. Seabirds nested in the niches and broken stonework; their harsh cries filled the air.

Marta called to Bonetapper, perched in his normal spot atop the wagon. “Have a look around, please.”

The raven grumbled something inaudible and flapped off toward the tower. That the nesting birds didn’t take very kindly to his intrusion was an understatement.

“They’re trying to kill him!” Sela said.

“They’ll fail,” Marta said, grinning. “Or if they don’t, it’s his own fault. Lazy thing could use the exercise.”

In truth, the raven seemed to dodge the mobbing birds nimbly enough. After a moment he was past their frantic attacks and flew into what looked like an archer’s window near the top. He didn’t fly out right away. He didn’t even fly out after a few minutes. By the time a quarter hour had passed even Marta was apprehensive.

“Something’s wrong, and I don’t think it has anything to do with birds.”

Marta backed the cart up until she found a spot of grass. She jumped down from the bench and fetched water and a bit of hay from the wagon, but she left the mare’s harness on. “We may have to leave in a hurry.”

“We’re going in after Bonetapper?” Sela said. “Couldn’t that be dangerous?”

“Of course,” Marta said. “To both questions. Are you coming?”

Sela nodded, though she clearly wasn’t happy about it. She unsheathed Shave the Cat and fell into step beside Marta. “He’s not really a raven, is he?”

Marta glanced at Sela. “What gave him away? The fact that he can talk?”

Sela reddened a bit but shook her head. “Magic would explain that, as it could almost anything, I suppose. Yet there’s just something…well, not raven about him. More than speech. His whole manner is human.”

Marta smiled. “Grumpy human, rather. I see you pay attention, Sela. That’s rarer than it should be. Now pay attention to this tower. We can discuss Bonetapper after I get my hands on his feathered hide again.”

Sela glanced sideways at Marta but didn’t say anything else until they were almost within bowshot of the tower.

“You’re not carrying a weapon,” she said.

“If by that you mean a sword, I seldom do.”

“Then what you said about killing me yesterday was just a bluff?”

Marta sighed. She wasn’t sure what path Sela was considering and didn’t have time to find out. “Not all weapons are steel. Let me show you something.”

Marta reached down and picked up a big chunk of broken limestone, about the size of a gourd. It was heavy; Marta braced her wrist with her right hand and held the piece up on her left palm, like a bust on a pedestal. In a moment what had been a large chunk or rock was no more than a collection of pebbles, falling to rattle faintly into the grass and leaves. Marta dusted her hands on her tunic. Sela just stared, mouth open.

Marta smiled. “What Power Holds, Weakness Frees. That’s the First Law of Power. It can have great effect, properly applied.”

“Y-you could do that to a person?”

Marta shrugged. “In a manner of speaking. It depends on the person, and what flaws are there to use. Do you want to find out?”

“Not in the least,” Sela said. “But doesn’t this mean that now I know the First Law? Am I on the Arrow Path?”

It was all Marta could do to keep from laughing. “First, knowing the name of the Law is not the same as knowing what the Law is, or else my mother would have taught me the Laws by rote and saved a lot of time and trouble. No, you have to understand what the Law means, and that’s trickier. Knowing the name of the Law beforehand can actually interfere with that. Second, you don’t stumble upon the Arrow Path; you choose it.”

“I don’t think I’ll make a decision just now,” Sela said.

“Wise. Shall we continue?” Marta asked. Sela nodded, slowly. Together they reached the edge of the woods. There was still an open strip of weeds and small bushes about ten yards wide between the woods and the tower. There was no way to cross it unseen if anyone was watching. “Nothing for it. Let’s go.”

Marta slipped across the open ground as quickly and quietly as she could, with many quick glances upward at an empty window high above the entrance. No one appeared in the window. There were no arrows shot or javelins flung down. Marta considered this a good thing, certainly, but it didn’t reassure her very much.

There was no need to open the door; it had fallen off its hinges some time before. She slipped just inside, listening very carefully and giving her eyes time to adjust. The first floor was more or less what she expected; debris on the floor and dust over all. But the dust on the stairwell had been disturbed, and that very recently, by Marta’s reckoning. She motioned Sela inside, and they waited a bit for the girl’s eyes to adjust to the gloom. Then Marta took a deep breath and started up the stairs.

Bonetapper screamed.

Well, not exactly. It was more like a squawk. As if he were consciously trying to squawk terror as a normal raven would, not‑‑as Marta already knew from her time with him‑‑as was usual for him at moments of genuine terror where conscious thought of any kind did not apply.

What are you trying to tell me, Bonetapper?

No more, Marta decided, than she had already surmised for herself. She followed the sound with a sort of determined fatalism, Sela close behind. The squawking became intermittent as they approached the top floor of the tower, then stopped. Marta signed, as best she could for Sela to wait, and listen. She went up the next several steps alone.

The top floor of the tower was a rough wooden platform already showing signs of decay. The roof above where the seabirds roosted had not yet fallen in, but there were patches of sunlight streaming though here and there. Together with what came from the windows there was more than enough light to see by. What Marta saw first was Bonetapper, caught in a net hanging from the ceiling. The second thing she saw was an arbalest. The man holding it stood by the wall just behind where the stairs reached the floor.

“Come up the rest of the way, m’lady. And please don’t do anything silly.”

Marta sighed and did as she was told. The floor creaked ominously under her slight weight, though it seemed likely that an unsound floor was currently the least of her problems. She studied her captor, as he did the same to her. He had long blonde hair that he wore in ringlets under a seaman’s cap. He was youngish and handsome in a rough sort of way. His clothes were those of a common seaman but the disguise was spoiled but his boots and gloves. They were of rich green leather and stylishly cut, almost aristocratic.

Marta didn’t ask his name. She didn’t need to. The traces of finery that he could not abandon and the pheasant’s tailfeather stuck through the crown of his cap told Marta everything. The child of a scullery maid and either a fisherman or a minor lord, depending on which story you believed. A corsair with pretensions to nobility and the gold to indulge them.

“Longfeather,” she said.

There might have been a muffled squeak from the stair below, or it might have been the tower settling. Marta hoped the pirate assumed the latter. No such luck.

“Tell your companion to join us. And quickly.”

“Run, Sela,” Marta said.

Longfeather pointed the arbalest a little less casually. “I wouldn’t advise it.”

Marta smiled grimly. “We only met a few days ago. What makes you think the girl cares what happens to me?”

“That,” he said.

“That” was Sela coming up the stairs, her sword sheathed, both hands carefully kept in plain sight.

Longfeather smiled. “Well, and well indeed. Set a trap for a gull and catch a pair of swans. This is my lucky day.”

((To Be Continued))

(c) 2014 Richard Parks

 

An Announcement. An Experiment.

Bkack Kath's Daughter-2It’s like this–recently my “discretionary” time has taken a hit. I don’t expect this to change much before the end of the year. At which time it will get better or it will get much worse. At the moment I do not know which. Sorry to be vaguer than usual, but it’s nothing I can get too specific about at this time. The upshot of it all is that I have to be even more selective than normal about what projects I can work on.

Which brings me to the subject of Power’s Shadow. This is the sequel to Black Kath’s Daughter, and the projected third book in the Laws of Power series. I know there’s some interest in the book but finishing it this year is going to take time I may or may not have. So here is what I propose–I’m going to be serializing the book here on the website, one section a week starting tomorrow. Since my chapters usually fall within 3-4 thousand words, I’ll probably break each chapter into 2 sections, clearly labeled. Those of you who want to read it without waiting forever for me will get the chance to do so here. I will continue to put up new material as written for as long as there’s any interest. If I determine there isn’t any, then no problem. I’ve got plenty of other projects that I could be working on. Otherwise I will continue this until the book is finished, at which point I’ll create an eBook version for those who don’t want to track down dozens of separate web posts.

Yes, I’m asking you all to help me set my priorities. No matter how weird that may sound to you it sounds a lot weirder to me. This is something I’ve never, ever done before in my entire writing life. I can hardly believe I’m doing it now. Still, it’s good to try new things. We’ll call this one an experiment.

Letting Go

WRITING 02I’ve written stand-alone books and stories and series books and stories. One advantage I’m finding with the stand-alone books/stories is that it’s easier to move on. Rather like the emotional difference between a brief fling and a long-term relationship. Note that this has nothing to do with either the quality or the emotional impact of a stand-alone book versus a series on the reader. I’m talking more about the length of time one spends in the headspace of a particular character or set of characters, and then one day, poof, you know you’re not going to be going there anymore. That’s the effect on the writer.

Some of you may have read a couple of my Eli Mothersbaugh ghost hunter stories. I wrote the first one, “Wrecks,” back in 1996. I wrote the last one (or rather I finished the last one, since it went through several iterations), “Diva,” in 2006. I’d spent ten years in Eli’s head, and when I finally realized that the story I was revising for the umpteenth time was going to be the last one, it was more than a little depressing. See, I liked Eli, and I liked reading about what he’d been up to, which was why I was writing those stories in the first place. Or to paraphrase The Most Interesting Man in the World (srysly?), “I don’t always write series, but when I do, they are not open-ended.” There’s always an overall story arc, even if I don’t realize what it is from the beginning. I finally realized that “Diva,” had left Eli in a good place, and he wasn’t inclined to budge from it. I haven’t written a new one in five years, so I must have been right.

Knowing where I’ve been, series wise, tells me where I’m going. The Laws of Power series, currently including The Long Look and Black Kath’s Daughter should eventually reach to four books, but that’s it. When I write the last one, Marta’s story will be told. I know I’ll grieve a little when that happens, since I’ve been writing about the character since 1994. The same thing will happen eventually with Lord Yamada. I’ll reach a point when I’ll know I’m done–or that he’s done–and that will be that. And it’s going to hurt a little when that happens. Yes, I know that none of those characters are real, but they were as real as I could make them.

The end has to sting at least a little bit, or I didn’t do my job.

Something Like Progress

Darling Du Jour, or Just to Show That I AM SO working on the sequel to Black Kath’s Daughter. The working title is Power’s Shadow. Subject to change, of course.

In this scene, Marta and her companion Sela are getting a report from Longfeather, a once and future pirate who, for Marta’s convenience, is currently a goshawk:

            It wasn’t long before Longfeather also returned from his scouting mission. He landed on a nearby pine branch and gave his report. “There’s not a lot of activity at the docks just now. There are two merchant ships making ready to set sail, but of course they aren’t going anywhere near the Five Isles. They’ll hug the coastline until they reach Borasur.”

           There was an aspect of the debt-bond that made it difficult, even painful, for the one who was in bond-service to work against the interests of the one who held the debt, in this case Marta. She could see how uncomfortable Longfeather was, and she easily guessed the reason.

                “Is that really all you saw?” Marta asked, and she put the power of the debt-bond behind her words.

                “No,” Longfeather finally admitted. “There was someone else.”

                The way he’d phrased his response wasn’t lost on Marta. Not ‘something else’ but rather ‘someone else.’ “No more dancing around the subject, Longfeather,” Marta said. “Tell me who you saw at the docks.”

                “I saw a vessel called Blue Moon. Her captain is a woman named Callowyn. She’s mostly a smuggler and does errands for Boranac, and so operates under his protection, but she’s a pirate, too, at opportunity. I do not trust her.”

                “And is there a pirate or smuggler that you do trust?” Marta asked.

                “Well…no,” Longfeather admitted. “Most of them are like me.”

                “So why did you feel it necessary to point out this particular lack of trust?”

                Longfeather apparently gave up. “This Callowyn…we have a history, of sorts.”

                   “What sort?” Sela asked. “Or shall we guess?”

                   Longfeather shrugged, and briefly displayed his wings. “She’d probably cut off my privates with a dull knife and spike them to her mast as a trophy before bothering to chop off my head  for the reward. That sort.”

                Marta smiled then. “A woman of taste and judgment. I think I like her already. But do not worry, Longfeather. She’s not going to see you. She’s going to see a goshawk.”

                Longfeather sighed, which was a very strange sound indeed, coming from a goshawk. “She’ll figure it out. I know she will.”